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Can someone critique this world?

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Can someone please look this over. I'll answer any questions you have about it.

@NobleWolf

One question-WHERE DID YOU GET THAT BEAUTIFUL MAP??

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https://inkarnate.com/
This website, while still in beta, is a really good map maker, even if you can't draw.

book

In the history it says apposed instead of opposed. The history is very good. Your villain is awesome. Your map (though good) is a circle divided into equal parts. Imao I think you should add a little more variation. But, of course, your world, your choice.