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Critique my town

@n o s t r a d a m u s location_city forum 3 comments schedule
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Small warning, there is a lot of backstory.
Thx :)

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@MissMia

Jeez mate that's a lot of text. It's really good though! I just have a few questions:

  1. How do they get around the city? Is it very big or can they walk. If not, how do they get the transport? Do they build it themselves or do they import it?
  2. How developed is their hospitals? Do they have medicine there? If so, how is it gotten?
  3. Do they grow their own food?
  4. How did the town populate and how big is it? Did they hook up with their cousins or where other people brought in? Sorry thats a weird question but i was curious.
  5. Do they have electricity?
  6. What food do they have?
  7. Do they have a sewage system?
  8. Do they have pets?
  9. Did no-one wonder where they went? Does the government not know of this secret town? Don't the imprisoned people go missing?
  10. How do they access the black market?

Sorry it's a lot of questions. No real critique just a few things I was unsure about. Also, when will you finish this book???? It looks really good!