Notebook.ai

I need feedback

@King-in-Yellow group forum 9 comments schedule
group
@King-in-Yellow group

Can someone look over my Universe and Tell me if they are good from a scale to 1 and 10(1 bad and 10 good) Invalid Universe

eco
@ClownB*tch eco

I was not very thorough but it seems like a solid 8-9/10

group
@King-in-Yellow group

@Alex_needs_sustenance Thank you, anything you think that I should change

eco
@ClownB*tch eco

I did not look at the characters very in depth so just based on the universe page, everything seems filled out very well and I can get a good idea of what your universe is, so no

group
@King-in-Yellow group

@Alex_needs_sustenance Ok thank you

group
@Tidermelon group

Is this still up for reading? It says that I don’t have permission to view it.

group
@King-in-Yellow group

@Tidermelon I got rid of it a long time ago

group
@Tidermelon group

Ah, alright then. :) If you ever need any feedback again, though, I’d be happy to help out!

group
@King-in-Yellow group

@Tidermelon Thank you, i will