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I Need Help Writing Emotional Scenes

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@Space group

I need to write an emotional scene and I really want it to speak to my readers and make them feel things for my story. Perhaps even shed some tears :) Their are multiple scenes but the one I'm kind of focusing on is a death scene.

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@Shadow_Knight group

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Hi~! I am good at writing very emotional scenes if you still need/ want help! And if you don't want me to help that's fine!

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@Space group

Yas! Please help me, I could really use as much as I can get

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@Shadow_Knight group

Alright! May I have some context if possible?

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@Space group

Um, so the scene I'm doing is where a character is forced to watched her boyfriend fight somebody else and he is eventually stabbed and slowly bleeds out. The have some alone time while he is dying and I want them to have an emotion conversation or whatever

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@Shadow_Knight group

Alright. We can move this to the PM's if you want to keep the plot private.

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@Space group

Yeah, I'll message you here in a bit because I'm in the middle of class right now. If you have any ideas right off the bat just tell me through the PMs