does anyone wanna here a poem I made for my English class

I'll only post it if someone asks. =P

Sure, why not?

Yeah, I wanna hear it!

Needles
It feels like needles jut out from every surface of my body
The stares of those who love
Those who hate
Those who feel the same way I do
Because I’m a porcupine
Covered in watching eyes
But my heart longs
For a joyous moment
In which the pins fall away
And my delicate frame can watch everyone back
And I can finally feel comfortable in my skin
But for now
There's only
Needles

It’s good!