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Hey I need help with editing please. The genre of the story is kinda a dark romance with mystery kinda tied in to it.
Help with editing
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person_off
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I could totally help!!
group
Awesome
person_off
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What do you need help with
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Editing this
It is only a copy because I copied the existing doc i have going
person_off
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Thanks. I'll try to get back to you tomorrow.
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Ok
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Here are my nitpicks:
You could let the story slow down a bit
Why did she kill the cop?
What is her motivation to kill everyone she gets serious with
Other than that, it's pretty good. The wording is great, just spend more time on individual scenes.
group
So two of those questions haven't been answered yet but they will after the next few chapters
and thanks
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Welcome