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okayyyyyyyyy. im going to put up a different WIP, I'll pull three chapters from the middle.
Teaser????
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https://www.notebook.ai/documents/103946
this is a sucky second teaser.
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and you have to be reeeeeely mean and nitpicky about details (not grammar)
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Well… if you want some critique on that, then sure, I'll help out~
The very first thing is I can't view it aha
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oh
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nah, doesn't work
here, try this.
go to said document and pretend as if you were going to make some changes to it, but then click about, which should be in the top right corner
click share this document, and enable link-sharing
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(Oh that's okay aha! And like Nie said, thanks again for being awesome!)
(It's fixed now, but @writers_goddamn_block will have to make the document public again, since the bug was in saving doc privacy changes!)
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Alright, I can take a smol peek at it now, but I won't be able to finish until at or after school
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The actual first thing i have to say about this is that it tends to switch from past tense to present tense almost immediately. And then back to past tense after a little bit. Maybe change that? I personally find that a bit confusing.
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The actual first thing i have to say about this is that it tends to switch from past tense to present tense almost immediately. And then back to past tense after a little bit. Maybe change that? I personally find that a bit confusing.
on it
oh my god lord andrew (Our Supreme Lord and Overseer) is here!
See, I told you it was good @writers_goddamn_block !
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I love the names you used!