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Want me to critique your story?

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calm_writer_gal group

Let me know if you want me to read and critique your story! And, if you would like, you could read mine!

@Kefi

Yes please! I'd love to read yours too, if that's alright- can I PM you the link?

@Oakiin

Hey! :D I'm curious to see what you might think of one of mine ^^

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calm_writer_gal group

@Kefi of course! PM me!

@Kefi

So, for whatever reason I'm having trouble sending you a PM…??? Would you mind just sending like. A peace sign emoji to me or something really quick 😅

@Kefi

Sorryyyy!!

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calm_writer_gal group

no, its fine!

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@stolenbrocoli group

Hey could you take a look at a couple chapters for me ?

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calm_writer_gal group

sure, @stolenbrocoli ! just give me a few days to find the time. . . ^^ looking forward to reading it! (and what are you looking for in terms of what I should take a closer look at?)

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@stolenbrocoli group

ok that's fine ! and honestly nothing in particular just any flaws or potential plot holes you might find. thank you :)

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calm_writer_gal group

@Oakley-is-Oaken-Bull i really enjoyed your story! it was really good!!! (*clapping) have you got anything to add to it? lol id like to read more!

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calm_writer_gal group

@stolenbrocoli i read it, and it's really good!!! i added comments to it as 'anonymous', btw. ;)

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@stolenbrocoli group

Thank you !

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calm_writer_gal group

yw @stolenbrocoli

@Oakiin

@Oakley-is-Oaken-Bull i really enjoyed your story! it was really good!!! (*clapping) have you got anything to add to it? lol id like to read more!

Thank-you! ^^ Yep, that's only the very start, though I unfortunately have only that at this current moment! I am very excited to keep working in that one though :D I'll let you knoe if I ever do!

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@Oakley-is-Oaken-Bull okay!

@RobinBlade

I'd like you to critique one of my characters, I know it's not the SAME thing you asked but if you don't mind I'd appreaciate it!

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@DragonSunGod sure!