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Wanted: A writer friend. Pls.

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@Kefi

Wow, that’s an awesome drawing!

Thanks!! <3

@Kefi

that drawing is BEAUTIFUL!!!

Thank u too!!! I was pretty proud of it

@Kefi

GUESS WHOS NOT IN ATLANTA ANYMORE!!!!

eco
@Anemone eco

You?

@Kefi

YEs!

@Kefi

It was fun tho, but I am ready to stay HOME for a bit. These last few weeks were wild XD

eco
@Anemone eco

Hey~ how's everyone today? :)

@Kefi

Hey~ how's everyone today? :)

Pretty good, how are you!

eco
@Anemone eco

I'm alright. I just got finished writing a poem.

@Kefi

OOoooHHH!! Would u mind showing me??

@Kefi

(I am ALWAYS down for reading some poetry :D)

eco
@Anemone eco

I'll go fetch it rq.

eco
@Anemone eco

Well, quick correction, it's more of a song. But hey, poetry, songs, same diff.

@Kefi

True! I'm excited now (:

eco
@Anemone eco

(Here it is!)


"Bullet Train"

5 AM on a Sunday.
I was struck travelin'
on a one-way.
Not a soul in sight
in the darkened lights.
It was really quite the fright.

The doors opened at a stop,
but only one person
made the hop.
From the platform
to the train floor
right before they closed the door.

You were that one person
the one who made everything better.
You were that one person
who fixed the seams of my sweater.
You don't know how much
You really mean to me…

Oh, you broke away the ice.
Against the odds of dice
you were the twelve that won the game.

You made me feel okay.
You washed the rain away.
You were my Superman, and you saved the day.

Oh, but the train was meant to stop.
And, of course, it would have crashed.
Oh, I couldn't stop the clock.
And I couldn't turn it back.

8 PM on a Monday
I was stuck walkin'
alone that day.
Not a soul in sight
in the dark of night.
Except for the single one who died.

And I…
I survived.

@Kefi

:O I could actually imagine music to that!! And the imagery in the lyrics was so GOOD

@Kefi

I loved this part especially (:
"The doors opened at a stop,
but only one person
made the hop.
From the platform
to the train floor
right before they closed the door."

eco
@Anemone eco

Thank you so much!

eco
@Anemone eco

I actually wrote it about a friend of mine.

@Kefi

WOW have you showed it to him/her?? I would actually cry if someone did that for me, that's awesome!!

@Kefi

They are one lucky human

@Kefi

(Unless they aren't human, in which case, my bad)

eco
@Anemone eco

Actually. I can't show it to him.

@Kefi

How come?

eco
@Anemone eco

He's not alive to see it.

@Kefi

Oh my goodness, I am so sorry!!

@Kefi

Ah, I guess those lyrics make more sense in some parts, I am so sorry though. It's really terrible to lose someone like that <3

@Kefi

Are you doing okay?

eco
@Anemone eco

Yeah, I'm alright. It wasn't anything that happened recently. I just couldn't find myself not thinking about him as of late.

@Kefi

It's okay to be sad, time doesn't really soften these things that much… Still, I hope you're with people who love you a lot and you can talk to about this <3