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Please critique my magic item

@MrBudD3r forum 12 comments schedule
@MrBudD3r

I would like to know what you think

@WaffleWizard

I like it! That's such a fun idea. My mind just went straight to the idea of someone trying to change their emotions for the desired power. Which sounds fun to write.

@MrBudD3r

Thanks!

The idea of someone changing their mood for a different power does sound fun to write! I'll try to incorporate it!

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SICK!

It's like an overpowered mood ring!

@MrBudD3r

Yeah!

Piperisgr8

This idea is really cool! I love that you added colors like lavender.

I Like how you added backstory to the template! I'll have to do that as well!

@elianking_theemonerd

This is so cool, I was particularly interested in the white and black colours and what they means

@MrBudD3r

Y'all've given me great ideas for incorporating this item into my story! Thank you so much! If you want to see the story when it's done msg me your Gmail and I'll share it with you!

@MrBudD3r

Excerpt from my story:
"Woah, so it's like an overpowered mood ring!"
@AshWillow

@Awesomeness

Wow!
That's really cool! I love all the powers you made and different moods.
I also like "Love=No Effect"

Dani Jean McGhee

I love that it's a mood ring, I have one of those too but it's called a cloff and is used to tell the time 😅

I like that different emotions reflect different abilities that's really cool however since it's a wizard ring does it have a bond with the wizard or can any old fool that uses magic steal it and use it.

I really like the idea and I don't think I have any criticism to give you