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Beauty and the Beast

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I want to try my own version of beauty and the beast, which is to be discussed

@_sleeby_rat_

can I possibly join?

Yes

@_sleeby_rat_

nice

I was thinking of a renaissance era and whatnot. Your character gets injured on the road by creatures of the night (to be discovered throughout the plot). The beast rescues her and brings her back to his home to care for her.

Is there anything different you were thinking of doing?

@_sleeby_rat_

actually, I was kinda thinking my character could be the beast? but I can figure out a different thing if you want

@_sleeby_rat_

and idk, I was thinking maybe the beast could live in some big ancient palace (sorta like the one in Shadow of the Colossus)

Do you want to the beast?

@_sleeby_rat_

it's up to you since you made the forum, I don't mind either way

Also, would you be alright writing in a more elegant writing style? Which will probably make more sense once I write my starter

@_sleeby_rat_

yeah, I can do my best

Rules

  • try to write at least five sentences, there will be leeway because sometimes it's hard to certain comments
  • I would like this to more elegant writing if that makes sense, so instead of: "she walked down the halls, admiring the decor" try: "the heels of her shoes clicked against the hallway floor, echoing down the corridor. However, she paid no mind to it, as her eyes were transfixed on the ceiling…"
  • there will be more mature themes in this, not just sexual content (can go as far as your comfortable, though I think it would be a little strange I guess to write fur/skin intimacy lol), but violence and such
  • try to reply a couple of times a day (though I would be delighted if you responded more), if you're going to disappear for a couple of days, try to give notice beforehand
  • have fun with it, and if you have any questions, feel free to ask
@_sleeby_rat_

alright, I can work with that. maybe for intimacy's sake we could throw a twist in with the beast? like maybe he's only human on the full moon, like a reverse werewolf?

Yeah, that sounds good to me, But maybe make it when that's also when he's at his weakest, he's vulnerable, and the creatures of the night know that and are constantly trying to attack. Or something like that.

And do you want to do it where my character has to fall for him to break the spell, or maybe going off the werewolf thing, she's his mate and in order to break his curse, she has to accept him. Or maybe we could do something completely different

@_sleeby_rat_

ooh, yeah, that'd be good

side note, I do have school and stuff like that, so I won't be active every second of the day but I'll do my best to get in a few responses a day

Form
Name:
Age:
Eye color:
Hair color:
Body type:
Unusual features:
Flaws:
Talents:
Personality:
Extra:

ooh, yeah, that'd be good

side note, I do have school and stuff like that, so I won't be active every second of the day but I'll do my best to get in a few responses a day

Which one?

That's fine, I have school too so I completely get it

@_sleeby_rat_

the first one was good, but I was thinking maybe the beast has to take them as a mate before he dies? and I don't wanna be that guy, but would gay/lesbian be okay?

So if he takes a mate would he be human, or at least at be able to shift freely?
For this, I'd prefer a straight relationship

Like, I can do a different gay rp, but for this one, personally, I feel like a straight couple would just be better

Do you still want to do the rp?

@_sleeby_rat_

yeah, I could look for a fitting character. and I mean, you don't have to do another one if you don't want to

Okay

Any more questions?

@_sleeby_rat_

nope, think we're good. can you post your character first?

Name: Amara Farrell
Age: Seventeen
Eye color: Hazel
Hair color: Ash brown
Body type: Small, slight curves
Unusual features: A long, pale scar on the thigh
Flaws: Absent-minded, does not trust easily
Talents: The piano and story-telling
Personality: Amara is not like other girls for her time. Most girls dream of marrying the man who will treat them right and kindly, though it rarely happens. Most girls dream of having children. Most girls dream of climbing up the social status and living in riches, heading the household. The was not Amara. She wasn't particularly fond of the idea of marriage, much less an arranged one just to gain from it. She wanted to live far away from her village, in a place where she could be whoever she wanted to be. A place where she wouldn't be afraid to speak her. A place she could be herself. Alas, there was not one out there, at least not one that she could get too. So most days she sat by her window, perhaps reading a book she had bought in the town's bookstore, perhaps writing her thoughts and stories, or perhaps lost in thought as she gazed out at the window, watching the bird fly away and wish she was free to do the same.
Extra: There are bruises that mar her skin, hiding under all her petticoats. They were not from any accident.

@_sleeby_rat_

oof sorry I'm sorry to think of a character that would work

Try making him like the beast in beauty and the beast. Just make him a lot darker