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Criminals Need Love Too (CLOSED) (MA THEMES)

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Soo I have a character who is a criminal, specifically a serial killer/vigilante with a good cause that I have been dying to use because true crime is pretty cool. This can be a romance RP, and is open to LGBTQ+ themes. If interested, let me know so we can work this out.

@Fraust

Hello!

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@Desvelarse pets

hey! interested in an rp like this?

@Fraust

Yep! Is there a specific character dynamic you're looking for?

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Well my character is a 23 year old, bisexual male. We could do something along the lines of a cop/agent assigned to his case, someone who asked for his help to get rid of someone (would possibly be the friend/spouse/kid of an abuser, as he kills men who harm their families), or someone who just stumbled upon all of this. Can be a friendship, relationship, or anything else when having to do with realtions

@Fraust

Ooh, I have a character who isn't normally a cop, but his personality would probably fit aha. He'd likely be a rookie since he's only twenty one, so he's in training, but he's eager and I think it'd work well
He also tends to be a little bit hyper aggressive and passionate at times so that could be fun aha (all my recent drawings of him are of him as a child oops)

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@Desvelarse pets

Yeah, that would totally work! And haha yes, my character is very hesitant and jumpy at times, so that would be funny to see how they would interact with each other

@Fraust

I can post my recent pictures of him if you want an idea of what he looks like aha
I also have a drawing of him that's older but it's actually of him as an adult lol

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i'll take whatever you would like to offer!

@Fraust

Alright, just a sec! I'm on mobile so I'll have to post them in separate posts :>

@Fraust

Here's the old one first (he doesn't have to be an angel in the roleplay, by the way)

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@Fraust

Recent 2!

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he looks great! and thanks for that addition @Cooper haha

@Fraust

Thanks! Should we have character templates?

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@Desvelarse pets

yes! i'll put one below

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Appearance:
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Hobbies:
Bio (optional):
Other:

@Fraust

Name: Nathaniel Tobias Windsor
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Since this is here, I'm gonna assume it's okay that he's an angel
Appearance: See above, but also details :D he's 5'4 and weighs about 55 pounds (he has hollow bones because flight and stuff). His wings are kinda janky looking (which I'm unfortunately bad at drawing) and he has a bullet hole in the joint of his left wing
Personality: He pretty standoffish at first to people he doesn't know, but he's passionate about his job and incredibly loyal. Assuming this is also a romance, he tends to be very, very clingy. He's incredibly physically affectionate once he's comfortable with someone and is liable to want to be held, hugged, etc all the time. He's also been known to be hyper aggressive at times, but he really tries to keep it in check so he doesn't get in trouble.
Likes: P r a i s e, success, reading, blacksmithing
Dislikes: Crime >:0, injustice in general, being belittled, being complimented
Hobbies: Blacksmithing/making weapons, singing, reading
Other: Basic backstory because it's probably important: he got sent out to battle when he was seven and his older brother ended up dying trying to protect him. A few months later, he went out flying and got shot down by a duck hunter, permanently crippling his wings. He was banished to earth when he was eight since he was no longer useful and has lived alone ever since. PTSD, trauma, all that good stuff. One of his triggers is gunshots actually, so that could get exciting

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Name: Vaughn Wilson Finley
Age: 23 years old
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian, most likely of English descent
Appearance: (see https://www.instagram.com/theguynamedbry/ for general appearance reference). He stands at about 6'0 and is toned with a slightly muscular frame. He has various little scars on his body, and one of his most identifiable markings is a tattoo on his inner, upper left forearm that reads 'Adeline' in a kid-like handwriting. He tends to wear casual clothing, though when working, he wears a black mask with a fanged, toothy grin on it, dark clothing, and gloves.
Personality: Around strangers he tends to seem introverted and generally quiet. He usually doesn't speak to other people unless completely necessary. Around clients (people who come to him for his help at times), he is extremely polite and caring. He becomes very attached to them and thinks of them as his family in a way. With friends, he is very loyal and protective over them. He is open about his past and work, and will often offer to do them favors and such. He would be considered the 'mom' type of friend. In relationships, he is very gentle and compassionate with the other. He tries to shield them from the bad that he does and doesn't take lightly to people insulting/hurting his partner. In general, he is a decently polite and seemingly well put together individual that most people wouldn't notice walking past them on the street.
Likes: Helping others, doing his 'job', Figure (sometimes, more about that below), and children
Dislikes: loud noises, taking his medication (more about that below), talking about his family, and police
Hobbies: his 'job', going on runs, doing research into criminals, and people watching
Bio (optional): I'm going to let this develop but there is going to be some basics given. He has been a serial killer since he was 18, and his body count is up in the double digits. He kills men that have been accused of abusing/harming their families, or more specifically, women (mainly mothers) and children. He was diagnosed with paranoid schizophrenia at the age of 15 and does not take medication for his illness.
Other: Figure, as seen above, is his most common hallucination. It is a human like hallucination that seems to be blacked out/made of shadows in a way. It helps guide him most of the time when killing. It also was the inspiration for his mask, as it has no features except for a gaping, grinning mouth full of hundreds of jagged and sharp teeth.

@Fraust

Nice! And I can make Nathaniel human aha

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@Desvelarse pets

Hey, sorry for not being around, I was at one of the BLM protests pretty much all day today. You can make him human, sure. That might go better with the theme anyways lmaoo

@Fraust

Alright, that's fine ^^ how should we start?

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@Desvelarse pets

I can put up a starter of Vaughn possibly hurrying home from a killing and they bump into each other??

@Fraust

Sure ^^

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@Desvelarse pets

(alright, I will put the starter up in just a moment!)

@Fraust

(Alright :>)

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The sound of a neck snapping was not like it was in the movies. When you snapped a neck, the person didn't immediately die and slump over. It was slow if you knew how to do it right. Vaughn watched the life drain from the man's eyes as he felt the steady cracks of the bones. The man stopped struggling, and he panted heavily as he let the man slump to the floor and he leaned back against one of the legs of the kitchen table. He eased to his feet, panting heavily as he adjusted his mask. The man had put up a real fight. But he was dead, and that's what he deserved for beating his pregnant wife every night, resulting her in the hospital with a miscarriage. That made his heart wrench.

Figure whispered near his ear that it was time to go. The neighbors might have heard a struggle and called the police. He nodded at Figure and collected his things, rushing out the back door of the home to cut through the woods to reach one of the back roads of the city that he could travel home by.

@Fraust

Traffic was horrible at the moment, and Nathaniel wasn't driving the car. His mentor was. As they were stopped, Nathaniel just jumped out of the car and started running towards the house he was supposed to be going to instead. He tried to find the quickest way to get to the house and, while checking his GPS, ran into someone and stumbled backwards. "Sorry, sorry!" He righted himself and looked up to see who he'd run into. "I-I… uh… sorry, I can't really talk, I've got somewhere to be."

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Vaughn had been jogging along and heading down the dark street. He had tucked his mask away under his sweatshirt to keep it concealed. Figure gave him a little hiss, alerting him just in time for a male to run straight into him. He stumbled but quickly caught his balance. His adrenaline had been spiked, so he didn't even notice the male coming in his direction. He glanced over the male quickly, making sure none of the blood got from his clothes onto the others. "It's alright- I can't either, I've got to run," he stammered out deeply and quickly.