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The Marked // 3/3 // CLOSED

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In a dystopian New York City, people known as Marked are considered criminals just by existing. If not immediately taken in, they are treated as outcasts, as less than human by society. The small black spade, found anywhere on their bodies, is an indicator of inhuman abilities.

The Marked, despite really only having each other, tend to avoid one another, for fear of sullying their already dismal reputations more. And then three Marked find themselves locked in the same cell, waiting for an execution for crimes they didn't commit. With no choice but to help each other break out, they do just that, and decide to take matters into their own hands.


  1. No OP characters, or I will yeet your ass outta here before you can say 'this bitch empty'. I can't stand invincible characters, man.

  2. Proper grammar, punctuation, and capitalization, please. I can get making a few mistakes, when you're tired, or English ain't your first language(It's mine, and even I have my issues), but if it's too common a thing, it irks the hell outta me. Call me a bitch, but hey.

  3. Slurs, homophobia, transphobia, rascism, sexism, anything that ends in -ism and that harms or promotes the harm of other people will not be tolerated. See my first threat.

  4. Hate the character, not the writer. Keeps spats between yourselves, outta my funzone. Also! Shipping is fine, but keep it a mutually okay thing, make sure it ain't abuse and/or creepy, and take smut to the PM.

  5. Detailed-ish responses, please. Think three or more sentences. To keep it going.

  6. I have the full right to add and edit this list. I also have the right to boot you if you're causing too many problems.

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~v~

@croccin-champagne

Squelcome!

person_off
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Hai!!!

@croccin-champagne

So, it's like midnight here and technically I'm supposed to be sleeping but that shit ain't happening, and I realized that I probably explained this badly. Want me to expand on the whole magic bit?

person_off
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Sure!

@croccin-champagne

Okay, so basically, here's this

The Marks, so far, have not been found to be hereditary. Nobody's sure what causes them, but they do know that people with them have generally increased senses.

The magic part is fun. because nobody knows what the hell is going on. The abilities can range from hydrokinesis to a literal perfect memory to the ability to speak any language without actually knowing it, and it doesn't seem to be based off anything, or have any rhyme or reason. One thing that can be noted, however, is that no two Mark's abilities have ever been the same. With practice, these powers can, on occasion, be terrifyingly deadly, which I'll touch on later

person_off
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Ooooooh, okie! Sounds awesome!!!!!

@croccin-champagne

A'ight, want me to hunt down a temp?

person_off
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Sure!

@croccin-champagne

Name:
Age(late teens):
Gender:
Sexuality:
Shipping:
Appearance(Include where their Mark is):
Usual Clothing/Style:
Power:
Fears:
Other:

@croccin-champagne

I ain't got the energy to fill it out tonight, but I will tmrw

person_off
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Same. I'll try tho

@croccin-champagne

Name: Anastasia "Ace" Loki
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Pansexual, but she's not too concerned about dating. Just, y'know, trying not to die.
Shipping: Fuck yeah
Appearance: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/764697211709136984/ Not all that tall, but looks like she could kick your ass. Sharp grey eyes that change with her moods. Numerous scars everywhere, including four bullet wounds scarily close to her heart. Her mark is right over her heart, visible in her tank tops, and presumably that ties into the bullet scars and how she was found out.
Usual Clothing/Style: A pair of black skinny jeans tucked into black ankle boots and a long sleeved shirt, in the same color, when she needs something more presentable. When she doesn't, an old, oil-stained pair of cargo pants tucked into beat up old combat boots, and a black tank top. She keeps her hair back with a black bandana when needed, and a pair of fingerless black gloves complete the outfit. The only jacket she owns is her old air force jacket, and she wears two dog tags, one her own, the other belonging to someone else.
Power: Ability mimicking. If she touches another Marked, she can mimic their ability. If she touches someone else, the previous ability swaps to the one of the person she touched. If she really tries, she can recall previous abilities she's 'snatched', as she calls it, though it takes a lot out of her.
Fears: Dark enclosed spaces, handcuffs, being blindfolded and/or unable to see.
Other: She had, at one point, been in the Air Force. Right up until her Mark was discovered, and she was dishonorably discharged.

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Name: Evangeline (Evie) Winter
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bi
Shipping: Let me think… hell yes!
Appearance: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/2c/f2/16/2cf216078ba2a9f2e31739893a92cfaa.jpg
Mark: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/107664247329028888/
Usual Clothing/Style: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/107664247328824500/
Power: Chaos magic, like Scarlet Witch. However, her magic is sort of… bottled up inside her, and if she doesn't release it every so often, it will "release itself". This is a safety measure for her, since her powers are beyond what she can handle at her age.
Fears: Someone will find out that she is Marked; her powers
Other: -

@croccin-champagne

((I love her, though your last two links just go to my dashboard instead of the pin))

person_off
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(I tried to fix it. Try them again)

@croccin-champagne

((They're workin' now))

person_off
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(Nice!)

person_off
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Hello, this sounds awesome! I'll be kind of busy though this week, but I'd love to join if you'll have me.

@croccin-champagne

You're welcome to! We can start it off slow, while you're busy, if you want

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Oh sure, that'd be wonderful. I'm just gonna be spotty at night because school is just piling a wholllleeeee buncha crap on us in the last six days lmao. Also, I won't be on in the mornings after Sunday. And super spotty in the summer. So if you're willing to deal with that then thanks!

@croccin-champagne

Well, I am, and I think Camie'll probably be fine with it too! I've got plenty of slower rps, so don't worry about it!

person_off
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Sweet. Let me get up a template.

person_off
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Yeah, I totally get it! ;)

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Name: Jesse Gray
Age(late teens): 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Pansexual
Shipping: Hell the fuck yeah.
Appearance(Include where their Mark is): Long black hair that frames his broad, set face. He has a very handsome set of features, with round dark eyes and a fine, strong nose and jaw. He is rather wry and slim, but he it rather muscular and well-toned. Can fit anywhere he wants. Tall as a pole at 6'3. His mark is on his hip, and it's about the size of his fist.
Usual Clothing/Style: Before he was caught, he dressed in relaxed business-casual. He loved wearing suit jackets with a comfy pair of jeans and loafers.
Power: Ability to shrink down into any size. He has been forbidden to use it on any occasion, for he will be shot immediately if he is seen trying. Because of him, there are eyes on them at all times.
Fears: Completely empty areas, being alone, very large, large rooms.
Other:

person_off
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Awesome!!!!!

@croccin-champagne

I love him so much. One more thing y'all, I'm thinking abt changing the Mark thing to something that like, has to do with their ability, so just uh, let me know what you think and keep that in mind?

Also, we ready to start?

person_off
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Yeet thanks y'all! Alrighty I'll do the keep.

Ready when you are.

person_off
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Yeah, I think Evie's is kind of like that, but if you want me to change it, let me know!

And hells yes!!!