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I have had writers block sense i finished chapter one…I need help.
https://www.notebook.ai/documents/136352
there read and comment any ideas or suggestions pls.
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I got it thank you!
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Casey, what exactly are you asking for?
Also, I love this story.
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you could have him go to school the next day and have a breakdown in front of someone important leading to the next incident
Or, you could have Nikias continually try to leave but Xander won't let him, leading to an argument or something.
but where are you trying to get with this story. Do you have an ending in mind?
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Fun, those usually turn out the best. sometimes.
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It's so much easer. you don't have to worry about plot and shit. you just go and hope for the best.
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a different one?
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I see
https://www.notebook.ai/documents/150906
It has more of a comedy vibe going on.
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oh fun, give me a sec and I'll read it. I have to take a quick test
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Ok, I love this story. the opening, the tone, and the James brothers. Oh, love them.
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Yes. yes really.
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Wow? are you surprised by your own work.
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Realy? why?
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Bc it's dark?
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Sir. I for one love your writing style. And just because something is dark doesn't mean that it's bad, it's just for a different audience
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your welcome. If you don't mind my asking, What did you have in mind for the end point for The Night Rider?