I have this idea for a book. I've been editing and tweaking the idea but it still has so many flaws. I'm gonna try to fit as much info as I can in this one post so you can help me with plot holes. HERE WE GO!
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A 12-year-old girl named Kayla Minor has suffered from being the middle of 10 children all her life. Often teased or ignored because of her status and misunderstood because of her fascination with tools and engineering, she's been waiting for her chance to prove herself. It comes in a way she couldn't have expected. Her parents suddenly go missing. She and her best friend, Mabel Sweet, go out into the world in a desperate search to find out what happened to Kayla's parents but ultimately to prove themselves to the world.
During the search, Kayla and Mabel find a junkyard. Fascinated by the curiosity of what could lay inside, Kayla says she'll "be right back" and goes into the junkyard. It turns out to be much larger than expected and soon Kayla finds herself lost within its treasures. One good thing comes out of this dangerous escapade, a dirty clunk of metal. Kayla takes it upon herself to fix this ugly, dead robot up and carries it with her throughout her endless search for Mabel. At night she fixes it little by little. By the time she reaches Mabel, she has a new friend. Roam-io is a fairly old model of a robot but being in a more poor, rural area Kayla is very satisfied with it. The 3 of them, 2 girls and a robot head out to discover shocking facts behind what happened to Kayla's parents and the truth behind it all.
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Some problems I have:
- I have no idea who the antagonist is or what the "truth behind it all" actually is. Sarcastically. Ya know, that would probably be helpful.
- I actually have names and ages for all her siblings but that is completely unnecessary.
- When I came up with the characters I tried to create diversity, so… Kayla's dad is African and her mom is Cuban they met when they came to America and shortly had her. Making her a beautiful Afro-Cuban American. I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TO DO WITH THIS INFORMATION!
and actually, at the moment I think that's it. Please help me fill any plot holes you find and PLEASE give me some more ideas to make this more interesting. OH ALSO! They live in rural America.
Thank you in advance. Y'all are fantastic writers.