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Im writing a romance/otome between a vampire protagonist and human love interest. What do you think

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Lacey Kat

Well I already made the characters, gave them lives, flaws and personalities,

The plot is the heroine Sophie is a dhampir and is heavily bullied by the vampires finally a leader vampire give her a chance to be a true vampire

Get a human and force them to be a sacrifice groom for her

So she is sent to the human world with some clothes, some blood packs and a word of advice: Don't fall in love
So after a long bus ride, She meets a boy named kind yet workaholic Matthew, He helps Sophie through out the school, They befriended each other and he takes her to the student council and meets the others Lucas a flirtatious and charmistic boy who is popular with the girls, He the have a feeling that he meet her before, Charlie, a shy and pessimistic boy, He tells Sophie to stop worrying about him and his problems, and Jax an aloof and hardworking boy, He tends to scold Sophie for slacking off and stuff. There while keeping her identity as a normal humal girl She must choose which boy's blood to drink but still she's technically also human will she choose to fall in love or follow her instincts

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On the one hand. It seems pretty decent. On the other hand the whole thing sound a little cliche. On my third hand it just might be good enough so that that doesn't matter.

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One thing you have to think about is morality. Sophie has to have a morality crisis because of the problem of eating one boy and marrying(?) another.