She looked around" we were told it was only a few towns away" Cole explained jerking her body away from Williams
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Evan piped up from the back of the bus. "Well, it looks like wherever 'a few towns away' is, it's really shady." He glanced out the windows, looking out at the gloomy sky.
" shut up Evan" she growled at her twin brother
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“Cole, your brother does have a point. It’s looks really really shady around here, and I doubt the school would take their “best, precious and valuable students” on a field trip that could go horribly wrong.”
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Evan popped his head up over the seat, grinning. "You hear that, Cole? I have a point." He stuck his tongue out at his sister before sinking back down into his seat. "Still," he muttered, "This is a little bit weird.."
Cole stood up and the bus driver slammed.the brakes making Cole fall.forward hitting her head in the floor causing a bit of blood fall
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As the bus lurched to a stop, Evan jumped from his seat, hands searching his pockets for some sort of weapon. As he gave up search in his pockets, he remembered that he'd brought the backpack he usually brought in the woods. Rooting through the pockets, he found his dagger in its sheath, and pulled it out.
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Jack was a bit concerned. not for him, but he was concerned about everyone on the bus, watching them search frantically around for any sign of any civilization and watching other people search for something to protect themselves with. Jack reached in his jacket, and reached for his back. He made sure he still had his bowie knife in his sheath. he didn't pull it out. he also made sure he still had emergency and medical supplies in a small drawstring bag. he had a phone, but had no service. He also had a compass, band-aids, and about 5 rolls of medical tape.
( okay so this is not how I wanted this to go the teachers and bus driver genuinely think everything is fine)
(i can delete it if you'd like)
( yes please nothing against you your writing is incredible)
Roux watched silently be in the back of the bus observing how panic fills everyone's eyes one after another. She fiddled with her knife, not worried a bit, because she knew her odds of surviving were pretty high. And if she died so what? Her eyes found the bus driver wait to see what he would do next.
(hows this? also you might wanna delete Roux your gonna get us killed)
(Right and Good)
(Also whats gonna happen to the bus driver?)
(he´s gonna get dragged out the bus without the kids realizing)
(dragged by what? and how do we not notice? )
(look I'll explain it all)