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(I am going to put it bluntly.
Your. Character. Can. Not. Hold. Vos. Back.
Your character is strong, I get that, but people have to be able to control their own characters. Vos is a demon king, and isn't really bound by mortal laws. It doesn't make sense for her to be able to restrain him just by grabbing his arm, or that she would fealibly be able to physically move him.)

( I didn't know he was a demon king
so we fixed it,
she just stood in the way.
If you didn't see that.)

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(I am going to put it bluntly.
Your. Character. Can. Not. Hold. Vos. Back.
Your character is strong, I get that, but people have to be able to control their own characters. Vos is a demon king, and isn't really bound by mortal laws. It doesn't make sense for her to be able to restrain him just by grabbing his arm, or that she would fealibly be able to physically move him.)

( No she grabbed the collar of his clothing.)

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(basically he had a lot of his powers taken away by a curse and doesn't get them back until he gets rid of the tally marks. what powers he does have are pretty nerfed, with the exception of his electricity, speed, shapeshifting, and "mind manipulation" (it's more like really unnaturally convincing persuasion))

(ohhhhhhhhhhhhh oh ok, thank you for explaining that.)

@_sleeby_rat_

(I mean it's okay, you didn't see he was a demon king, but it was just an fyi. he is pretty strong, and it would be difficult to hold him back and stuff)

@_sleeby_rat_

(side note: he doesn't have access to his halform (basically where he's between his human form and true form. human form is his, well, human form, and his true form was that freaky disembodied dragon armor thing)

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(Yeah I'm really sorry about that!)

@_sleeby_rat_

(it's all good. just maybe try and read through everyone's character description when seeing what sort of stuff you can do to them)

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(Oh wow, thats cool!)

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(it's all good. just maybe try and read through everyone's character description when seeing what sort of stuff you can do to them)

( Again I apologize

I should stop apologizing now…
but uh
I'm really sorry.)

@_sleeby_rat_

(like I said, it's okay)

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( Alright now back to waiting for shuri
and not procrasinating on my homework.)

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(I'm here!)

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(Yay!)

@_sleeby_rat_

(oof okay, we can start back up. also should there be some big event that pulls them together maybe? if we need one I have a suggestion we could use)

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(I have this robotic warmech that Baron regularly fights, but we can power it up so that it's a challenge for everyone.)

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(Waiting for you to respond, Shuri.)

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( I think either one of those ideas could work I guess.)

@_sleeby_rat_

(that works)

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What was your suggestion, octane?

@_sleeby_rat_

(well, the apartment that Vos lives near (his son's) is actually basically a building full of various supernatural creatures hiding from the government/a lab that captures and tortures supernatural creatures. well, I was thinking that maybe that apartment could be under attack and we all have to go save it?)

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(So, this or that?)

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(So, this or that?)

@_sleeby_rat_

(I don't mind either way. if you want we could combine them so that the robot attacks the apartment or something?)

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( I think Brooklyn lives near Vos so I say the apartment

Poor Brooklyn
She never got her carrots .)

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(That works! Maybe the Warmech is there to extract the creatures!)

@_sleeby_rat_

(ooh, that would be good)

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( I think thats a great idea!)

@_sleeby_rat_

(so should I start that off or what?)

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(Wait Shuri can you reply to my character first before we do it?)

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(This robot can lift 80 tons, has mach 10 movement speed, and as a machine, it has virtually unlimited endurance, at least until too many of it's parts break down, which would likely almost never happen unless we broke them down. On top of that, it has armor made from a fictional material I created called Ygdrassium, which is over twice as strong and tough as titanium, while being only as heavy as steel, furthermore, it's less conductive of heat and electricity than titanium. It also has two extendable and retractable blades made of Ygdrassium, a plasma cannon attached to the right arm, a gun with ASC rounds (Anti-Superhuman Combatant) bullets, also made of Ygdrassium, that are faster and more powerful (Not to mention explosive.) attached to it's left arm, and a top-notch AI programming, with detailed combat knowledge. It has thermal, infrared, ultraviolet, and nightvision, and lastly, it's 12 feet tall, and 5 tons. Is that too OP?)