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I PROLLY SHOULDN'T, BUT THIS IS A SCI-FI RP YEAH!!!! (CLOSED) (#LARSTORIA)

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(okie bruh shall we get this moving?)

//ok

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(sure)

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Lars ran down the dock with the small crate tucked under his arm. "Last one!" He shouted, glancing back.

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(Okay)

“Alright!” Victoria said, grabbing a shiny bolt from a small pile and flicking it into the air. “Let’s go!” She caught the bolt and walked after Lars.

Neku jogged after him.

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He clambered up the ramp and tossed the small box in a corner. "Close the door!"

“Got it!” Victoria grabbed the handle and hefted the heavy door shut once everyone was inside.

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Lars slid into the pilot's chair and started pushing buttons. "GET READY FOR LIFT OFF!" He cackled.

Neku rushed into the cockpit and started up the engine.

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(ahh I have to go just assume my character is just tagging along)

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(Yep!)

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"Odin!" Lars called over his shoulder. "Do we have everything?"

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(Hello my frens?)

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(Actually I have a character who's not really good as a passenger but more of an inventor that I planned on using, could I still use them?)

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(hmmm…..idk I guess? Depends on if you intended him to be part of the crew…)

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Odin ran quickly through the mental checklist. He nodded in the direction of Lars, giving him a thumbs up.

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Lars nodded in return and grabbed the wheel eagerly. "Good to go then Ms. Vick?"

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(hmmm…..idk I guess? Depends on if you intended him to be part of the crew…)

(Her, and yeah she would be in the crew.)

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(I'd have to see her bio)

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(Then no. No inventor)

(I meant she's a computer programmer. And a freelance journalist.)

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(I'd have to see her bio)

(I could show it to you soon, but I'm on and off)

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(Okay then I'll wait)

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(Okay I have some concerns

  1. I really don't want alcohol involved
  2. Her looks are kind of Mary Sue-ish
  3. We don't need a computer specialist

Just some things I noted)

Lars nodded in return and grabbed the wheel eagerly. "Good to go then Ms. Vick?"

“Perfect-o!” Victoria called from the loading bay. “Wheels up in 5!” (Is that ok?)

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(Okay I have some concerns

  1. I really don't want alcohol involved
  2. Her looks are kind of Mary Sue-ish
  3. We don't need a computer specialist

Just some things I noted)

Right, I can redo it.

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(Yeah that's fine)
Lars peered out the front. No signs of pursuit. "Anytime now Vick!"

“Alright! We’re in the air!”

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Lars giggled and jerked the wheel up. The ship jolted and slowly rose.