Serious Writing Improvement RP.

This is an urban sci-fi/fantasy RP. But before we get started, I want you to take part in an experiment.
We start in a homey, whimsical little cafė.

Here's the rules…
-I won't force a rating, but just keep the racism, ethnic prejudice, xenophobia, sexism, homophobia, transphobia and bigotry the absolute Hell outta this one, and don't be graphic for the sake of being graphic, be mature.
-No IRL hate.
-No controlling others' characters without permission please.
-Original characters preferred please.
-Every single sentence in this RP should be as good as you can make it. I want writing gold, of course if you're having a bad day, that's fine too, just do what you gotta.

Could you please give me the pleasure of joining this sophiticted roleplay?

Where was this when I needed it?

Hello, may I?

I would like to join. I can't promise it will be out of this world amazing writing, but I want to improve and well, that's what it says in the title.

(What's the character template?)

(All of you may join. Anyone who needs to improve is welcome.)

( Thanks! So whats the plot exactly?)

Name:
Gender:
Sexuality:
Age:
Species:
Background
Personality:
Appearance:
Gear:
Other:

(We'll make the plot as we go along, but I got a few choice story arcs in mind.)

( Well can you give me a few hints I guess so I know what to do with my character?)

(I was thinking a story where two nations are locked in war, and our characters see how it affects the day to day lives of others, while also being caught up in it, and doing whatever suits their character more.)

Ooohhh I like that))

(Yeah I also like that.)

I got one question for you guys, should it be our Earth, or an Earth with different nations, because there's gonna be magic and tech regardless.

How about

Earths?

(Could you explain the concept in more detail.

(
So I'm thinking
That Earth has to like battle against another realm.
I want to call it the last War
because it's when Earth and it's nations finally and truely works together inorder to save their planet.

And then the other realm, they want to take control and stuff.)

(Alright, so for the other realm, how about a few suggestions.

Hell?
Purgatory
Elemental realms.
Or something else.)

Hell))

( Lets go with like an alien race if you want.)

(We can combine the two. Maybe it's against a realm called the Hellscape, with surreal and hostile creatures, that resonates with our world but comes crashing into it for a reason we can find out later.)

( Cool.)

(Characters?)

( yep gonna do that.)

Name: Zhavia Valentine
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bi, but leans towards guys a bit more.
Age: 19
Species: Don't know what her species is called. She has Telekinesis
Background: (Is it okay if this developed along the way?)
Personality: Stubborn, head strong, blunt, does mostly get along with people if they get along with her, kind if they are kind to her. Will only fight if its necessary or if someone starts it.
Appearance: Albino skin color, golden tiger like strips on her legs and arms and two on each cheek, black eyes (like it's all black there's no white.) Golden hair color, her hair goes to her waist but she usually has it in two braids, 5'6 thin but strong.
Gear: https://pin.it/xzkgzptubfkxry That's her people's warrior outfits but the come in different colors hers is black and it has a lot of secret pockets for knives. https://pin.it/fwosopukqk54zu This is her main weapon.
Other: None really.

(Anything goes for species, so long if it's within reason, and yes for the backstory.)

(Can I join?)

(Can she be from the other realm earth is fighting against? If yes I might change a few things.)