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@_sleeby_rat_ forum 4156 comments schedule

(I actually have to go to bed soon, so see you and the others tomorrow hopefully)

@_sleeby_rat_

(ok, see ya)

@_sleeby_rat_

(hello)

(why good morning)

@_sleeby_rat_

(mornin')

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(helloo)

@RedTheLoveless

(hello? is it me you're looking for?

lol sorry. hi)

@_sleeby_rat_

(ayy)

(hi again)

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(yo)

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(lol I finally got around to writing the opening scene of my novel and I'm so freaking happy)

(nice! That can be one of the hardest parts, I've found XD)

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(yeah, I've been putting it off for weeks lol. I've been kind of afraid to write Asura's character because I was afraid I'd butcher him completely lmao)

(lol and did it go to your satisfaction?)

@RedTheLoveless

(nice! that's really awesome!)

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(sort of? I wanted to introduce him as this loud, angry demon person, but so far he's a quiet, sophisticated rich-looking man.)

(pfff I'm sure he'll show his true colors eventually XD)

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(haha yeah. He's currently robbing a convenience store whoops)

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(but he's doing it quietly)

(haha sounds like the best way to start a story ^^)

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(haha, thanks. I'm probably going to post it in the critiques forum once I finish the first page lol)

(cool! Will you let me know when you do? I'd love to see it if that's all right)

@RedTheLoveless

(same here please?)

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(lol okay. It's not very good though, just so you're aware. I'm the worst at writing and it takes me a really long time to produce something that's actually good)

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(here you go: https://www.notebook.ai/forum/sharing-critiques/yo-come-critique-this-lit-opening-scene)

(Don't worry about that! I'm sure it's great and I'd love to read it ^^)

(Oooh! yay!)

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(haha thank you)

(ok hang on lemme write down what I think on that thread)

@_sleeby_rat_

(hi hello I'm back)