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"It's also the city of art, music, and a few other things." He said. "Any sights you want to see?"

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Ether went uninvisible and said, "KISS!!!" and she smacked their heads together .

(You realize they left all of you behind?)

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(I'm invincible, I was always there)😈

@DarkWolf

(Lol)

(Levi can choose who to teleport with, and since Ether said no, he left her.)

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(Super speeded sped WHATEVER TO PARIS!!!)

(It doesn't matter. Remember, Levi has a matter-sensing sixth sense to aid his teleportation [like Nightcrawler] either way you have it, either he knows she was there, or they're gone already to Paris, just the two of them, and even if she used superspeed, how would she know where they went.)

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(I HAVE SUPER SPEED AS MY POWER ALONG WITH INVISIBILITY!!!)

@DarkWolf

(How does she know where they are?)

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(Um…. She just faced all around the world until seeing you….)

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*raced

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(That's a little OP….)

@DarkWolf

(Yeah……I agree.)

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(Um………. this is frustrating

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(Well I never said who I smacked heads with the other person…..)

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Ether knew it was dumb, she smacked heads together in class and the teacher would be annoyed.

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(How about Ether did the smacking to the um… what are their names?)

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(Wait… then who was it…?)

(That is quite OP, the Flash in the comics, can rescue a ton of people out of a city before a nuclear bomb, which happens at lightspeed, making him millions of times faster than light. Scaling to that, that would make your character billions, if not trillions of times faster than light, which would contradict how Levi speedblitzed her earlier with teleportation, and hw she somehow looked for them with an injured eye. Furthermore, how is she ignoring these MFTL+ side-effects, and how is she finding them with an injured eye?)

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(Naoki and Alanna!!! She might have made them kiss… Or no? I'm confuzzled!)

@DarkWolf

(we could just pretend that post didn't happen…)

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(NO!!!)

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(Yeah…. let's just do that….)

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(I'll change it…)

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(……..please)

@DarkWolf

(Ihdc…)

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Ether went uninvisible and said, "KISS!!!" and she smacked Naoki and Alanna's heads together .
(Better?)

(I do VS. debates in the fiction community a lot. I know everything about how these kinds of things work. And I'm great at detecting plotholes. This is my thing. Trust me, I know how this happens. This is why Levi's teleportation is instantaneous, but he can't be everywhere at once.

@DarkWolf

(Cool.)