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River looked up as tears fell out of her eyes "I–can't –Brethe" She gasped

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Liam shut his eyes. "Look kid, it'll be okay. I won't let anything happen to you, I promise."

River closed her eyes and calmed down a little
(teacher: Ok introduce yourselves to the class
River: Hyperventilates)

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( ……………..I don't know how to word this.)

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(? Word what)

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Liam patted her shoulder awkwardly. "There there.."

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(I want to critique on that scene right there, but I don't want to be rude.)

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(Ah…)

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(Im sorry, things like this annoy me a lot. Sorry!)

(Go ahead! Don't be mean though)

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(I'm sorry if this sounds mean. But I just think that River's panic scene was……..poorly written? I just think it could of been better, a bit more detail too.)

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(Yeah, I guess. But it's just a roleplay. No magnificent detailed panic attacks required if you don't want to lol)

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(Hai)
Veda relaxed a little. "Where are you? I mean where are we? We're not the The Island, are we?"

(Is she really blind, or is she faking or something? Sorry, it's prolly a rude question.)
"The Island? What Island? No, we're… in a random mansion for some weird reason," Paige responded.

(Veda is actually blind.)
Veda nodded as she heard some talking in the distance. "I hear other people. They all seem panicked. We should go see why." Veda said evenly, turning towards Paige and trying to feel her way towards the other girl.

(Okay. Sorry again, that prolly sounded really rude.)
Paige came towards Veda and wrapped an arm around her shoulders and lead the way towards the others. "I'm Paige, by the way."

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(Yeah, I guess. But it's just a roleplay. No magnificent detailed panic attacks required if you don't want to lol)

( Just saying it could have been better. Now I shall shut up and try to contain myself.)

(Yeah, I guess. But it's just a roleplay. No magnificent detailed panic attacks required if you don't want to lol)

( Just saying it could have been better. Now I shall shut up and try to contain myself.)

(lmao i knpw it was a carp scene because this was my way of adding River into this RP XD)

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Xander paced. His worry came in little waves, just enough to cloud his thinking. "I wish I could stop overthinking everything, and that my mind would stop racing enough that maybe I could help come up with a real solution to this. Just maybe… Everyone needs to keep saying what comes to their mind. No idea is a bad idea at this point."

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Veda let Paige lead her towards the others. "Thanks. My name's Veda, by the way."

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"Maybe we could look around more. There's got to be a way out if there's a way in. I mean, if the kidnappers put us in here, they would've had to put us in our bedrooms we woke up in. Then they would've got out from somewhere," John said, still not being able to take his eyes off the screen in the case more devastating news appeared.

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(I'm finally back, yayyyy and I MISSED SO MUCH WAT HAPPENED)

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Veda let Paige lead her towards the others. "Thanks. My name's Veda, by the way."

Paige smiled warmly, but realized that Veda couldn't see her. Stupid… She and Veda entered the room with everyone else. "Uh, we heard you guys screaming… what's wrong?"

@Natasha

Veda clutched Paige tightly as she listened attentively to the sounds in the room.

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Paige wrapped her arms around Veda, trying to assure her security.

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"You two don't know…" Liam blinked at the new arrivals. Great. This is great. How do I politely say what is happening? "Fantastic," he muttered.

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Xander looked at Paige. "I'm not sure how to tell you this without scaring you, but I'm not going to beat around the bush. Long story short, we have to vote for someone to die."

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Veda took a shaky breath. "So basically The Island all over again. Wonderful." Veda muttered, loud enough for everyone to hear.

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Paige's expression deadpanned and her face paled. After a second, she asked a strangled question: "When?" Upon hearing Veda, she said, "What, Veda?"

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Veda sucked in a breath. "Then vote me." She spoke up.
No! You just spent seven years fighting for your life! You can't just give up now!
Veda ignored the conflict in her head. "Vote me." She said louder.

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"Let's not jump to conclusions yet," Xander replied, "We'll try to find a way out of this before we vote for anyone."

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"No," he said firmly. "We're not. We'll find a way to keep everyone alive."

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Lixi looked to the newcomers, she was very shy, but she needed to ask. "Veda, how does the person voted die?" Lixi asked shyly.