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Valencia's Arrows (Open 6/8) COME JOIN! WE HAVE COOKIES!!

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(Lol Liam is Tenleys younger brother. He was chosen to come to Valencia. WAIT!! Maybe we can do a wi teir solider thre thing where Liam "dies" and turns I to a traitor and that's what Harvey was doing while Valencoa was closed??)

(Also, do any of yall want to join a new rp?)

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(Lol Liam is Tenleys younger brother. He was chosen to come to Valencia. WAIT!! Maybe we can do a wi teir solider thre thing where Liam "dies" and turns I to a traitor and that's what Harvey was doing while Valencoa was closed??)

(Also, do any of yall want to join a new rp?)

(Reading the first part no offense was very confusing….)

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(And no thanks, last time I was in many RPs I neglected my other life things even more then normal.

(Lol, that's fine but also a mood)

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(I'm really confused I'm sorry)

(About what?)

@Joy_

(What you suggested in your post, sorry. I didn't understand your 'wi teir solider thre' thing, or where Harvey fit in. Sorry!)

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(Yeah me to Joy….)

(Sorrt I meant winter solider type thing)

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(Okay that makes a bit more sense… then okay let’s go with that.)

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(It would also be character development for Tenley.)

(Yeah, she is one of my more underdeveloped character)

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(That would change her personality a lot though… poor thing would be super depressed.)

(Or really cold)

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(Either works.)

@Joy_

(Oh okay! That makes much more sense.)

(Yeah, sorry lol)

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(It’s alright.)

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(So how are we going to have Tenely just show back up? We had been using the excuse that she had been with Liam.)

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She could find them after walking for a while looking for the others

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(Well she could call Ava or just go back because she couldn't contact Ava and find them.)

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(Whatever floats your boat.)

Tenley smacked her commute ovation device one last time before giving up. "Its no use, this thing is never going to work. Your heavy but landed on it." Tenley glared at her brother

Liam took the device and after messing with it for a bit, he gave it back "use it now, it should work." He watched as his sister called another girl, Ava was it?

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Tenley smacked her commute ovation device one last time before giving up. "Its no use, this thing is never going to work. Your heavy but landed on it." Teblsy glared at her brother

Liam took the device and after messing with it for a bit, he gave it back "use it now, it should work." He watched as his sister called another girl, Ava was it?

(Can you please fix Tenley’s I spelt name please? It’s bothering me a lot…. and welll… the line of dialogue not inclosed in dialogue.)

(Which line of dialogue?)

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(It’s in clear if Ava was it? Is a line of dialogue or not. Just saying….)

(It isnt dialogue, it him thinking.

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(So are they calling Ava?)

(Yeah, her communication device should either buzz or beep with a new message because they are still trying to make the dang thing work)

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(Got it!)

Ava jumped when she felt a buzz on her arm. "O-Oh! I-I think I'm getting a m-message from T-T-Tenely!" She exclaimed. She tapped it to look at the message.