And now I need critique

@Consider-PB_and_the_Jellies Bruh 3 comments April 29, 2020

@Consider-PB_and_the_Jellies April 29, 2020

I want critique on the fracture fairytale I wrote
It was originally an English assignment
Fractured Sleeping Beauty

@Shadow_Knight April 29, 2020

I love the sass the narrator has! I almost didn't care about the story, I just wanted to listen to what the narrator said.

@Consider-PB_and_the_Jellies April 29, 2020

She was my favorite part of writing this