Anybody need an editor?

I'm bored and I have nothing to do so… anybody have a story in need of editing? I'd be happy to help if you need it

I already have some awesome editors, but I always welcome other thoughts if you're bored! The entire thread is on one storyline. The link is https://www.notebook.ai/forum/sharing-critiques/the-pravaci-court-leave-me-a-critique.

I really like your story, it was great and I can really see the effort put into it. The only thing I'd vaguely have a problem with is that I felt a bit overwhelmed at the beginning when you wrote all this information. Other than that I think it's wonderful. Keep up the good work

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/340800?preview=true
Could you critique what I have so far?

Oh my goodness, this totally passed my radar. Thanks for your kind words!

No problem, Also @Fangirl616 sorry I wasn't on I'll try to read through it today

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/340800?preview=true
Could you critique what I have so far?

I'm not able to reach the site