Notebook.ai

Brutal honesty needed - I am about to put my Universe back to *private* so please give me feedback

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@Penstorm

I have opened up my Universe for Anyone who could give me feedback. If you go to SCENES and then to the chapters tab you can read my first 3 chapters by googledocs. The rest are notes and such.
Have fun exploring and please let me know what I can improve on especially the chapters!
*I do not own any of the pictures that I have in the galleries - I'm not that talented lol

pets
@Riorlyne pets

After a quick look at your pages, there are a couple things I found that will make it a lot easier for others to explore your world.

  1. Don’t use this sort of code font in your pages. It breaks the formatting and on a smaller device readers have to scroll way over to the right to read it.
  2. Your chapters/scenes would be easier to read in a Google doc or the like, as Notebook’s not really optimised for novel writing, just worldbuilding. If you want to stick with using scene pages, a blank line between paragraphs would really help.
@Penstorm

@Riorlyne - Thanks for the tips
I put in a link for google docs - I hope that works
As for the font, I don't know how or why it is doing that. It was not my choice and I would love to know how to fix that if you know.

pets
@Riorlyne pets

The code font usually happens when you have backticks ( these ` ) on either side of some text. If that’s not the case, feel free to copy-paste the contents of one of the problem fields to me in a PM and I’ll see if something else is causing it.