Notebook.ai

Critique my extremely outspoken MC

@n o s t r a d a m u s location_city forum 2 comments schedule
location_city

Just be wary there is a lot of info, and contextual stuff. She's and absolute ray of sunshine (jk is actually an anti-authoritarian salt machine). Destroy away.

@CoolBeanz

Honestly it seems like you've thought her through extremely well and I'm not sure what else to say. Are there specific parts of her you'd like critiqued? If so I'd probably be able to give you a deeper response.