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Critique My Opening/Prologue (Must be a fan of Supernatural)

@SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group Carry On forum 6 comments schedule
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So, I'm writing a Spn fanfic with one of my friends. Despite not actually having the Winchesters in it, we do reference events, creatures, characters, objects, locations, and even use some songs from the show. I took creative liberty with certain things though.

I'm looking for someone who can politely suggest changes, and tell me how they feel towards the characters. I also ask that you don't point out grammar errors, for if I am to grow as a writer, it'd be bettter for me to search for them on my own.
Would anyone like to beta-read and critique it for me?

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@Knight-Shives group

Hey I can help critique you, though I have not finished supernatural I am on season 9. Am I qualified.

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Yes, that does indeed make you qualified, my new found 'family member'!

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@Knight-Shives group

Nice to meet you

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Nice to meet you too! I'll send you what I have sometime today; got stuff to do in preperation for Christmas.

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@Knight-Shives group

Ok, cool