How can I make this better?

@Zandra2119 5 comments March 26, 2019

@Zandra2119 March 26, 2019

It's short, there isn't much detail. The characters (The Raven and The Fox) symbolize me and my friend. *they are people, not animals just fyi
It's going in the direction I want it to, but I know it can be better. Any thoughts? ples

@Zandra2119 April 02, 2019

Ples

@Reblod April 04, 2019

I don't know about everyone else but I'm not allowed access so that may be why you haven't gotten help yet

@Zandra2119 April 04, 2019

Oh, ok thanks

@Zandra2119 April 04, 2019

Should work now =)