I'm willing to critique characters and stuff!

No problem
also it looks good Natasha!

Thanks

*Happily jumps up and down

I love my family, but none of them are writers and my mom is the only one who actually reads besides me, so it's nice to get some feedback that will actually be genuinely helpful and not just be random suggestions.

My dad loves teasing me about how writing is soooooooo easy.

Mine is the same way!! But no worries I love doing stuff like this…If you need anymore help feel free to ask!

Thanks! :) I have one character that I would love if you critiqued, but she's not done yet.I'll finish her tomorrow and send the link.

Ok!

Thank you!

No problem!