I Will Gladly Edit Scenes, Plots, and/or Ideas

Basically what it says! If you have any questions, leave 'em down below! I'll be glad to help you out!
Note: I won't do character critiques unless you post the details about the character(s) in this discussion. It's hard to do any editing or make suggestions when you're flipping through two or three web pages.
Second Note: I'm 100% here for dramatic, emotional scenes. Those are actually my favorite!

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The first is the final scene of a book I'm writing. The second is an epilogue to the last book of a series in which the last one is as well. The last one is definitely the most dramatic. If you need some context, just ask.