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Original vs. Rewrite!

@SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group Carry On forum 8 comments schedule
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Hello fellow notebookers! I'm looking for someone to critique both the original and the rewritten versions for one of my stories. It'll mainly be the original that you'll be looking at though, for I'm not that far on the rewritten version; still working on chapter 1 actually. The original only consists of 5 chapters. Anyone interested?

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@Reblod flag

I will if you still need someone

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:-D We'll start with the original version, if that's alright!

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@Reblod flag

Sure

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I inboxed you.

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@Reblod flag

Oh yeah sorry everything slips my mind
I'll do it now

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@Reblod flag

Do you mind if I used google docs to suggest things?

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That's fine, though I do use Google Docs for my writing, research, etc.