DONT need to be gentle, be honest, even in writing (im from brazil so i dont speak english perfectlly)
Please criteque my universe?
The world has a serius lac of life due to a fight involving the gods, and the only existing form of life are the creatures somehow conected to the fae.
Due to a fight involving all the gods that was as long as 7.000.000.000 years,
the only survivors are Asmodeu, Bane, Corellon, Gruumsh, Lolth, Sehanine, Tharizdun, Tiamat, Vecna and Zehir.
without Moradin, nothing is created, without the Crow queen, nothing dies and without Pelor, there is no light at "day" only the moon light at night.
Gravity works normally thanks to a gravitational force field made by Corellon.
Due to the war, the fae have been damaged, for this reason all magic (except the one that comes from the gods) have a 5% chance of going wild.
Why are the gods fighting? How are some creatures connected to the fae? If the Crow Queen is gone, then how come there is a serious lack of life? Also, how have the fae been damaged?