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I would love some critiques on my boys and hopefully, they're not too bad. You also don't have to critique all of them, just do as many as you'd like! Thank you in advance!
Cole: Cole Granger
Hunter: Hunter Granger
Seth: Seth Reed
Tristan: Tristan Bowyer
Hey! :)
Here's my critique of Cole:
(Bear in mind that this is the first time I've ever done this, and I am by no means an expert!)
Cole seems like a great character over all! I really don't know a lot about his world, so I can't get to nitpicky about anything, but the only thing I would really say is that if he had a certain type of parenting style that caused him to be the way he is, you should take a look at some similar stories from real people. Just to make sure your facts are all adding up correctly. But he looks pretty dang well thought out, so good job! :D
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@Hollydraws
Thank you!
I think it all just depends on the person, as I've heard of some turning out like Cole and others the complete opposite!
Again, thanks! It was nice for the first time! =D
Glad I could help! :D
I don't really know much about that particular scenario, so sounds like you did great!
Thank-you! :D
