pls beta read my second chapter (link to first included)

@n o s t r a d a m u s 4 comments February 01, 2019

@n o s t r a d a m u s February 01, 2019

Feel free to critique as you wish. Both chapters are supposed to serve as introductory chapters. Thanks :)

S.M. Gomez February 04, 2019

I'm having trouble viewing your first chapter. When I click on the link it says note not found.

@n o s t r a d a m u s February 04, 2019

S.M. Gomez March 07, 2019

Thanks, I will try reading it some time within this week.