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Uh, so I had this idea

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So randomly i came up with a title and now i have a whole story for it so if it sounds interesting or you can give me some pointers that'd be much appreciated.

So it's called In The Short Days I Knew You,
its about these 2 teens, one of them has just moved into town, in a house near the mc's. Eventually they meet and they get really close and fall in love and all that bullshit. So i was planning on the story to be written in a sort of recollection that happened, and that they were sad it was all a waste because the twist was that the whole thing was their suicide note?
its dark i know, its just somethin random.

Sounds pretty good

Might want to careful how you go about it though. Reading about suicide could set someone off.

@Sugar-Lover

It sounds so good. I would read this. I WANT TO READ THIS

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of course lavender, i wasnt gonna explicitly desribe it or anything. and also Suga lover its a coincedence you're here because it was gonna be a Yoongi fanfic.

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Also, I've started so here's a bit of the start for a little teaser:

It had been a relitively normal morning, put my rings on in the right order, get ready for school, take my pill, get an apple for breakfast, and leave.
I was just closing the door behind me when I saw you.
Your family had just moved in.
And of course I hadn't accepted my parents offer to come welcome you, because, frankly your family looks utterly terrifying.
Oh man.
Now I had to walk behind you to the bus stop.
Or even worse show you the way.

I remember you looking so, wrong, so out of place in this quaint little town.
Like me.
Completely clad in black, with brightly dyed hair, eyes drowned in makeup, and a constant 'fuck off' face.

@Sugar-Lover

of course lavender, i wasnt gonna explicitly desribe it or anything. and also Suga lover its a coincedence you're here because it was gonna be a Yoongi fanfic.

Who’s the other teen?

@Sugar-Lover

It just occurred to me that since it’s a suicide note that one of them has to die, which got me sad, I was listening to Love is not over and now I’m crying, the song knew what I was thinking.

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the other teen the mc was just gonna be an OC, shes the one who dies

@Sugar-Lover

I was like yay ship, then I was like someone has to die. I feel like an OC is better for dying lol

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Hi. I think this is a really, really good idea. BUT. I do like what you said lavender, you should be careful how you go about discussing suicide. I have a friend who's considering suicide in high school and I think you should relay somehow that suicide is a bad thing and tons of people will be really sad and depressed if you do and it will ruin other people's lives and yours for no good reason. Here's a little idea for the very end:

I know that what I'm doing is terrible. I shouldn't do it. It will ruin so many people's lives. Especially yours.
What will you do without me? I'm not trying to sound vain, but as I close my eyes in depression, I wonder what your life will be like. Probably terrible. What am I doing to you? What am I doing to myself, my friends, my family? I know. I am ruining their lives. Forever. All those good memories….my mom braiding my hair, my dad teaching me how to ride a bike…my first kiss with you…I just remember the light in those moments, and then the darkness comes back. Help, I'm crying. Help. How do I get out of this? I want to stay in the light because I know the darkness is bad, but the darkness is pulling me too hard to keep holding on to the light. It will be easier to just let go. I can't stand all these bad things anymore. I want to stay, I don't want to do this, not really. But I have to, just to spare myself all the pain.
I'm sorry.
I love you so, so, much, and if you really love me, you will understand.
Goodbye.

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drops mic

Applauds Rumple's well done speech

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You know it
lol
But seriously, if you're publishing, a lot of suicidal people might read bc my friend reads depressing books and so we all just wanna make sure they don't become more depressed. If possible, less depressed.

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i mena thats the direction i was going to take it anyways, ive stated that before

Wau… go for it! But as That_One_Lavender_Owl said, you might not want to write TOO much about the sooicoide.