When you are writing a character that is in the LGBTQ+ community, don't just outright say, or make them say that they are gay. Idk to me when that happens it makes it feel forced, let the reader know they are gay, without outright saying it, but don't make them do something ridiculously gay either. Ease into it. Something like this.
This is an example of what not to do:
I walked out the story and looked into the sky and shouted at the top of my lungs, "I'm gay and no one can stop me!"
Here is another:
He grabbed the boys face and kissed him so long that it felt like days.
The first one is fine if you are writing a comedy (ig) and the second is fine if you are writing a… kinda sensual romance.
I feel it should be something like this:
We saw Marcus' eyes, we all knew what he was thinking, but we didn't dare say it. Maya nudged him in the shoulder, a sign that he should go for it. Marcus stood up and awkwardly walked over the the person. "H-hi… um…" he stumbled over his words, "I'm Marcus, and.. do you think I could get your number?" The person turned around, "Of course," He said kindly, "Nice to meet you Marcus, I'm Jake."
I don't know that wasn't my best but you know what I mean.