Anybody want to talk characters?

We can critique each other’s characters or just talk about our oc baby’s and our favorite tropes.

I have many oc children!

nice! tell me all about them

Okay, so lemme find my newest character!
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@AngryLex (RIP Kaiser and my mental health) 2 days ago
This information is found to be from a deserted lab and was clutched in Time's hand when it arrived.
Username: @Lex-The-Snex-Who-Is-A-Flexy-Rex
Name: Name unknown, subject has responded to names such as- Vertas, Meyrill, and Time. Subject seems to use Time the most.
Age: Age Unknown
Gender: Subjects gender seems to vary with each name it responds to. Vertas seems to be male, Meyrill seems to be either female or gender neutral, and Time as a whole seems to use both male and female pronouns with an equal amount of use.
Species: It has been determined that subject's species is of the unknown variety but has aspects of multiple species. It has also been deemed that the other names the subject responds to are of different species and can be seen in ghostly forms when subject is responding.
Powers/Abilities: Subject as Time
Weaknesses (At least 1): It is very hard for Subject to control their urges for bloodlust and their forms are known to take over at times.
Bio/History (Optional): Not much is known about the subject, they had simply appeared in the labs one day.
Appearance: The subjects main appearance is a small figure with silver hair and gold eyes with clocks as pupils. When speaking as the others, the subject has ghostly figures behind them. It seems that all "spirits" have not been shown and subject, on the few times they speak, have said that the others were shy and that they would show themselves in no time.

Oh my god that’s so cool!

The clocks as eyes is an amazing idea

Thanks!
Time is my child~

And the eyes are becuase Time is an Embodiment (A type of god in my writing) And I wanted it to have a unique design

That sounds really cool, are there any other embodiments like space or anything like that?

Yeah!
My story is revolved around my characters becoming Embodiments and the hardships they face to get there!

i love it!

the story i'm working on is all about mages, i just never know how to make a good antagonist.

Tbh… All my characters are a little evil….
I have a small group of characters, 3, that are my villains.

oh?

Yeah, I have Virgil who's magic is to control fear
Heath, who is Virgil's little brother and has body manipulation
And Quin, who is a demonic entity.

oof, they could do a lot of damage together.

Yeah!
Quin usually just stays in the background, making sure they don't get hurtt

have you ever watched "disenchanted"? Quin reminds me of Luci from that.

I can't say I have, is it on Netflix?

yeah, it's hilarious and kind of weird

Okay, I'll add it to my watch list

Hope you like it!

Hey so i don't suppose you would know how to write a good prison break, would you?

Well, it depends….

my mages are sent to control a prison outbreaks of other mages turned criminal, except WHOOPS I don't know how to write a realistic prison break.

Neither do I!

Ah well

Hey do you think you could do mine too?

Hey I havent read a lot from this one but I love talking about my characters and was wondering if I could join?