Notebook.ai

Can someone please critique my MC?

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Baby Fairy

I want her to be finalized before I start the writing process. Thank you! Hehe

@I'm Just Saiyan

Is she sort of a tsundere or just cold to everyone?

@I'm Just Saiyan

Do they face oppression because of them not being human? Or are there other non-human races and/or characters within your story?

@I'm Just Saiyan

Did you draw the picture or did someone else? The picture really helps imagining them

@I'm Just Saiyan

Which pronouns to use? Or do they not care?

@I'm Just Saiyan

Is she sort of a tsundere or just cold to everyone?

even when close to someone

Baby Fairy

The opposition is racial yes and they’re hated, yes that art is my own, they don’t care for pronouns, they really aren’t a tsundere since there isn’t a love interest it’s directed to and in the story she never shows a sweeter side suddenly but I guess she has some attributes of a tsundere

Baby Fairy

Oppression* not opposition