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Can you critique my character

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Brief Description: A romantic rebel without a cause, He is a carefree, sarcastic and moody boy who tends to keep to himself, He only has on thing on his mind getting through and finding someone to love, He also happened to the first and only half phantom(It was caused by his soul almost getting stolen by a ghost) which basically make him a target for supernatural creature to kill or eat

I kind want avoid the emotional abusive "bad boy" or making him a damsel in distress

Rayne

I think he is well thought out and you spent a lot of time on his backstory. I like it.

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I think he is well thought out and you spent a lot of time on his backstory. I like it.

Thanks :)