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can you critique this character?

@sharkfinn_ey forum 7 comments schedule
@sharkfinn_ey

https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/659200#!

i haven't given them a gender yet, so i wonder what you think the gender of this character could be.
There's still a lot to be done about them!! I have like 0,4% of their backstory etc haha, but please judge away :)
https://nl.pinterest.com/ArtNouc/cats-whales-and-murder/mason/ this is their board if you're interested.

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@The-N-U-T-Cracker

Alright, I'll see if I can critique this after I finish jumping around and screaming about Doctor Who.

@_ava_read

I don't really understand why they get out of breath because of stress, maybe you could change that?
Just reading his bio, it doesn't really give me any sense to how/where he lives but other than that, it's really good