Could anyone draw/critique my characters?

So these two are the main couple in this musical I'm writing, and I was wondering if anyone would be up to drawing them! (I'm also looking for critics, so if anyone would like to voice their questions, comments, or concerns on anything about these characters, I'd be more than happy to respond to them! I'd like to know what I should do to make them a convincing couple, how I can make them strong characters in their own right, etc. etc.)

As far as outfits go, Cynthia has a caramel brown sweater and leggings that look like jeans, but they're not made of denim. Louie just has a white t-shirt and swamp green shorts with pockets.

Hi.i am very happy to help you!
To be a convincing couple ,i think they should be a little different,like one of them should be like very sirius and the second should be very funny.
Hope you will read my comment!

Looks good so far. I can see that you're really starting to develop them.

One piece of advice I would give is to fill out one of these character profiles for yourself. After all, you know yourself better than anyone. Make it as detailed as possible, and when you've completed it, compare its length to the length of your created characters. If you want to develop your characters really well, their profiles should be as filled as yours!

Also, as I am a Christian, I really appreciate their values. You don't see that a lot in the arts world so it's like a breath of fresh air. God bless!