Invalid Character Here she is! Any comments would be helpful, I am an inexperienced writer and would love any critiques.
Could someone critique my character?
It's very interesting! I like her, although I am curious as to what 3 languages she speaks
She seems really great and well known ! Keep her that way and never forget what are her wishes and you'll have an amazing character ! ;)
She seems like a very well-thought-out character and she's very believable. Good job!