Thank you! (I don't know if it says this or not by SOMA stands for Sisterhood of Magic & Anomalies)
Critique My Character?
Your character seems really well put together! One thing I would suggest is adding parts to her favourite foods and possessions. Having an explanation as to why her favourite things mean so much to her will help develop her a little bit more. Otherwise, I think you have a great character!
I really like it, maybe try to put more things into full sentences
a few points:
- ad to the flaws how they affect how she interacts with the world around her. otherwise, it could be interpreted many different ways and might not even be a flaw. Even "regularly kills people" might be considered positive depending on how it is written into the story.
- Why does she assume everyone hates her?
- "As kind as she knows how to the animals she studies" <- What do you mean with this sentence in personality type. (nitpick, not important, just curious)
- What is a genetic therapist? If it involves interacting with and helping people I'm not sure how that works with her personality.
- " Addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division" <- so, basic calculus?
Overall she seems to be a reasonably well-made character.