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Critique my character?

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I feel like I've finished fleshing him out, but I wanted to get a second opinion before I moved on. Here's his link: Major Markus Brown

He's kinda a good guy in the beginning, but my protag joins a rebellion and Markus becomes an antagonist
Let me know if u have any questions lol 😂

wow this is great! I love how you've changed the layout of the board too!

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@Leo-Valdez-Is-A-Slytherin Awe, thank you so much! 😊

you're welcome!

Carter Halfmann.CW

Looks super cool, if this were a book I would read it