I have two characters that I need review and to be totally bashed if they deserve it. Thank you!
Critique my characters?
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aight i have a few comments
- dyslexia is more of a genetic thing than a result of poor education, but it would definitely cause some conflicts when being taught by someone who doesn't know how to help you work with it
- remmy's really tall, which isn't impossible, but it's kinda unlikely,,,,, you don't need to change that lol i just noticed it and decided to share my thoughts
- why did remmy and his sister go to the usa? how did that get arranged? (maybe they went to live with a distant relative or a family friend??)
other than that stuff, they're really neat!! it sounds like a super cool story, well done :)