Notebook.ai

Critique my characters please(:

@mckapo forum 3 comments schedule
@mckapo

and possibly help me add mannerisms/flaws.
Kressa is the most thought out, Catho in the middle, and Georgina not really.

Catho - Catho
Georgina - Georgina Hamilton
Kressa - Kressa

LiteraturePhantom

They’re pretty good actually.

Here's some sites I used for my characters' flaws and mannerisms.

https://writerswrite.co.za/123-ideas-for-character-flaws/