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Critique My New Character :)

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Rachel

Would love to hear all of your opinions!

Blue Duck

She seems a little skinny to be "curvy but toned". Maybe try either making her shorter, or around 130-145 lbs. Other then that, the backstory was really interesting, and cool. We really liked the grandma!
-The blue duck team

Rachel

Thanks so much I'll definitely change that!

Blue Duck

No problem :)
-The Blue Duck Team