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Critique these two for me please?

Lydia 3 comments June 05, 2018

Lydia June 05, 2018

Hi, these two characters are brother and sister. I just want to see what you guys think. Tell me if something seems off or I am forgetting something. Thanks so much!
This is Ellci: Ellci
And her little brother Pike: Pike

Thank you I love you all!

@Blossom_Utonium June 05, 2018

My only beef is that they both seem like genderswapped versions of each other because they both seem super similar, personality-wise. I think Pike's character could be fleshed out more.

Lydia June 09, 2018

okay i'll work on it